From: ehbarak
To: "Jeffrey E." <jeevacation@gmail.com>
Subject: Re:
Date: Thu, 30 Nov 2017 00:45:42 +0000
Hi Jeff
I always open by nature for any criticism. Even enjoy it in a way. Will call you on 2100.
I just really can do only a little bit about it, except for telling the editor that I've got it from a person I highly
appreciate and drive him to put their best guy to deal with it.
Best
EB
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On 29 Nov 2017, at 18:59, jeffrey E. <jeevacation@gmail.com> wrote:
I am sensitive to sounding too harsh. I feel as if my cousin is playing the violin for the first performance ,
and it borders on the painful to listen. cute but painful. The english is awkward and makes it almost
impossible to read. but finally , yet. finally yet but plus a few more buts and ors and finally . I think every
paragraph needs a college professor to review and edit it needs a redo if you are serious about the english
version .
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